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Tuesday, March 27, 2012

Model Sentence #1

In the polyglot mass of humanity were members of varied social strata: rich and poor; highly educated and illiterate; religious men and agnostics; the kindhearted and the selfish; courageous men and the dull-witted (Wiensenthal 5).


What do you notice about this sentence? What makes it strong? Using this sentence as a model, write your own sentence mimicking the author's structure. Leave your sentence as a comment on this blog post.